Sorry for the lack of updates lately regarding ‘A Step Into Darkness.’
I received my professional editorial feedback from Jericho Writers.
The report was professional with good constructive criticism and feedback. For me, it was worth every penny spent.
I have a few scenes to re-write and I need to develop my MC slightly. I was provided with a few other pointers which I have taken on board.
I have been told that I have a really nice and strong central idea with the potential to really create a page-turner.
The statement above has truly lifted my spirits. I did expect to receive such praise and encouragement when I submitted the first MS as my first ever novel.
I think a month or so of hard work shall have the story ready for re-submission.
All part of the process which I am loving.
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Hi everyone. Sorry for the decline of my blogs and updates, August was a crazy month for me.
I’m pleased to announce that the editing of my debut novel is now complete. This has been submitted today for a professional edit.
My next step will depend on the feedback I receive which may take up to six weeks. I promise to keep you updated.
During this 6 weeks downtime I intend to start the planning and structuring for my next book.
Also during this time I intend to self publish some short stories I have been working on. These are in a complete new genre at the opposite end to the spectrum from my current crime thrillers. I’m going to publish under a pseudonym which I don’t intend to disclose. This is merely for fun and I’m keen to see where it takes me.
Don’t panic though I have a growing list of crime thriller ideas that I intend to do justice to.
Thanks again for your support and patience.
Craig
P.s I know I have been trying to push everyone to write there own story….if this is not for you then I encourage you to read. Read as often and as much as you can. Trust me, the escape does you good.
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Hi everyone. Sorry for the decline of my blogs and updates, August was a crazy month for me.
I’m pleased to announce that the editing of my debut novel is now complete. This has been submitted today for a professional edit.
My next step will depend on the feedback I receive which may take up to six weeks. I promise to keep you updated.
During this 6 weeks downtime I intend to start the planning and structuring for my next book.
Also during this time I intend to self publish some short stories I have been working on. These are in a complete new genre at the opposite end to the spectrum from my current crime thrillers. I’m going to publish under a pseudonym which I don’t intend to disclose. This is merely for fun and I’m keen to see where it takes me.
Don’t panic though I have a growing list of crime thriller ideas that I intend to do justice to.
Thanks again for your support and patience.
Craig
P.s I know I have been trying to push everyone to write there own story….if this is not for you then I encourage you to read. Read as often and as much as you can. Trust me, the escape does you good.
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After a journey of almost 16 months I am pleased to announce that today I typed the words ‘The End’ into my debut novel A Step into Darkness.
This is a momentous achievement for me and a day I never thought Id witness before I started out. This road trip has been a roller coaster of emotions, but I have come out unscathed and a far better writer than when I first started.
Today I have fulfilled a life long ambition and I am excited for the future as I develop my skills in the craft of writing.
Sadly the process is not over. A short break is in order before I return fresh ready to embark on the editing process which again will be a whole new journey for me .
I will keep you updated on the editing process and any other future writing projects I embark on.
Thank you all for your patience and your kind words of encouragement. I hope I don’t let you down.
Onwards and Upwards!!
Craig x
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Firstly I’d like to apologise to everyone for not providing regular updates as promised. It has been a hectic few months what with the F1, friends visiting me and my UK vacation. I am now back on track and raring to go now that the finish line is in sight for me.
A Step into the Darkness is now 75% complete. I have decided to set myself a deadline of the end of July to finish the first draft and I’ve also set myself a writing target of 2hrs a night in order to achieve this. Without setting this I was worried I would become easily distracted and loose the flow of the story. I am now clear and focused on what I need to do and where I need to be so fingers crossed.
In the UK I met up with a fellow author and retired Chief of Northumbria Police who supplied me with a clear insight on not only police practices but on how my story could be improved to make it more engaging for the reader.
With this in mind I am pleased to announce my story is set in my hometown of Cramlington. It was originally called Elmdene but as all the other locations and geographical references within the story were accurate and as I was basically describing Cramlington within the majority of scenes (Write what you know and where you know). Changing the name will make it easier for readers to identify with if they know it is an actual town not a fictitious setting. The only thing I have done is made all street names, characters and character names fictitious.
Once the first draft is finished I plan to put it away for a few weeks in order to clear my mind of the story (2 years in my head now) allowing me to start the dreaded editing process with a fresh mind.
Dame Vera Baird QC has kindly arranged for me to spend some time with a 24/7 Response Officer from Northumbria Police and this is something I’m really excited to participate in and is tentatively planned for when I’m back in the UK in August.
I intend to use the experience gained from this opportunity to fine tune and clean up any grey areas within the police procedural side of the story and I will hopefully capture it all in my first few edits. Not sure yet as to how many edits I will require as I have been editing throughout when I have not had the chance to write.
A Step into Darkness was originally planned to be a standalone novel and writing a novel has always been a dream for me since childhood but since I have embarked on this project and after taking numerous writing courses I now have many other stories which I plan to write and share. Entering short story competitions, passing conversations, news reports and things I have observed have all led to a number of ideas forming in my head that I feel I can do justice to.
Once A Step into the Darkness is completed I am ready to write my second novel and It looks like I may take a few of the characters from the first story with me and see if I can develop them more in future stories. At present unless anything changes or if new ideas appear my next book is going to be about rape, betrayal and revenge set over three decades!
At the same time as this I am going to research into a second writing project which is something new for me (I love the research and planning). I’m looking to write a compilation of short stories based on the Second World War recounting tales of valour and bravery from unsung heroes focusing on all of the countries from the Allied and Axis Powers that were involved. I want these short stories to be fast paced, engaging, exciting and as historically accurate as possible. The short stories are going to be a hybrid of non-fiction and fiction with multiple points of view written in both first person and third person.
I know I have set myself a major challenge here but if all becomes too much my priority will be the second novel.
If all goes to plan my next update will be tell you all I’ve completed the first draft.
Take care everyone and enjoy your summer.
Craig x
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Apologies for not posting recently. I was having a wonderful vacation in the UK and got side tracked.
I will post my book update next week as a I’m now nearly finished the first draft and a few interesting things took place when I was home.
For now Id like to post a short story I wrote about Inspiration for a writing competition earlier in the year. I hope you all enjoy.
Eureka
Stubbing out his umpteenth cigarette of the day into the already overflowing ashtray, Dan pushed himself back into his leather chair, his mouth tasted foul and nothing was going to take away the feeling of decay inside.
Picking up his cup of tea, his face twisted as he spat the cold contents back into the cup.
‘Come on, come on” he forced himself.
His mantra fell on deaf ears; his plea for inspiration was ignored.
‘Give me something…anything…please.’
Glancing at the clock displayed at the bottom of his monitor Dan was gutted that only five minutes had elapsed since his last time check. He was confident that it would have been at least an hour.
Lighting yet another cigarette, feeling repulsed by the smell and taste, he started rocking himself back and forward on the castors of his chair whilst gripping onto to the front of his desk. Hey he thought, this could be a new office workout routine.
Snapping himself back into reality he rose and paced impatiently around his small office.
Yesterday had been the same. Same brick wall and same blankness.
Last night it had come to him though, deep in his dreams. Clear as day.
Why then was he struggling again today? He had entered his office full of confidence but now annoyance and frustration were starting to well up inside him.
‘Bugger this for a game of Soldiers’ he exclaimed and left the room.
Five minutes later, he was getting into a bath. Nice warm water, filled to the brim, encapsulated with bubbles from his Radox bubble bath.
He sank his head under the water enjoying the feeling of tranquillity that swept over him in an instant.
Five minutes later he leaped from the bath like a breeching Humpback Whale, water cascading over the bathroom floor.
Hastily pulling on his robe, he sprinted back to the office still soaked, trailing wet foot marks across the carpet, his unsightly bits jiggled from his exposed body as he jumped in front of his PC.
His fingers danced on the keyboard, the click of his key strokes non-stop.
Forty five minutes later, he was done.
‘Best get the bathroom tidied up,’ Dan thought to himself smiling like the cat that had caught the cream.
The End.
I hope you all enjoyed this. As always please feel free to comment and share.
Enjoy your weekend.
Craig.
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Everyone towered above her, blanking out the light, hurrying to reach their destination.No time for manors, deeply focused on their own journey and ignorant of others.
Of course they could not see her, hidden so far down below tucked away in the shadows.
They had been late leaving today. The rain did not help either. The path was slippery underfoot, leaving her with no time to navigate a safe passage through the many puddles.
She wanted to pause to catch her breath but every time she reduced her pace she felt the sharp tug from her mother’s arm, pulling her along. To stop was to loose time.
‘No time for dawdling today darling,’ she said ‘so much to do and no time to do it all.’
They turned into the quiet road that led to her primary school. School insight her mother instinctively reduced her speed, the stress of the first battle of the day gone.
Hand in hand they walked down the quiet street lined with weeping willows and bungalows adjourned with immaculate gardens, lovingly maintained and in full bloom.
Suddenly she stopped dead in her tracks. Her mother’s firm grip unable to propel her on any further.
No. Something is not right, something is wrong today, she thought to herself.
‘What on earths up with you?’ demanded her mother, clearly not impressed.
‘Old Mrs Coe was not there today mammy.’
‘What?’
‘Old Mrs Coe was not there today. She is there every day.’
‘Who is old Mrs Coe?’
‘A kind old lady, she smiles and waves at me every morning form her kitchen window. She was not there today.’
‘Oh come on that’s ridiculous. You have school young lady.’
Her mother gripped her hand and started walking. No something was wrong. She dug her heels in and refused to budge.
‘Something is wrong mammy,’ she pleaded with her mother ‘we need to check’.
‘For god’s sake,’ her mother muttered but she led her by the hand to the house and knocked gently on the door. There was no answer.
‘Look. That’s the window she stands at,’ she said pointing to the long bay window at the end of the house.
Peering inside her mother let out a low ‘oh no,’ before turning to face her daughter.
‘You be a good girl and go sit on the wall. Mummy just needs to call for an ambulance.’
The End
Another one of my short stories. Hope your all enjoying them.
The first ambulance left the scene with lights flashing and siren blazing, desperately weaving a safe route through the crowded street. At the end of the road the ambulance turned left, immediately speeding up onto the dual carriageway, making its way as fast as possible to the nearby General hospital.
The second ambulance however did not leave the street to the same fanfare as the first. No lights flashed and no sirens sounded. The ambulance left the scene under a sombre atmosphere. The gathered crowds silenced and lowered their heads respectfully, stepping to one side to allow it to pass.
No one in the street knew who was in the second ambulance, but they all secretly prayed that it was Gary Jackson.
Sadly the second ambulance contained Faye Jackson.
Her body at the age of twenty two was so severely savaged and abused, that in the days to come; her own mother would struggle to identify her.
Despite attempts to save her at the scene Faye Jackson had died minutes after the arrival of the ambulance.
Now unconscious, Gary was blissfully unaware of her passing.
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Hi everyone. Hope you all enjoyed that little snippet from A Step into Darkness. Any comments would be greatly appreciated
Going back to UK tomorrow for 3 weeks so wont be able to write much, however plan to do a lot of editing and research in-between drinking copious amounts of good white wine and nibbling on French cheese and pate which are the things I miss the most from England when I’m in Baku.
Not certain but I’m hoping to make an announcement on my return…. Nothing major… well for me it is…so don’t get to excited ha-ha.
As always Id like to leave you with an inspirational quote.
Thanks everyone and take care.
Until next time
Craig x
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